Jawnduss's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mandate]

Audio quality wasn't the best.. try to speak more clearly, and eliminate background noise.

[Chalk Outline]

I feel like this is a good starting point, you're picking up the basics and that's what's important. keep practicing and i'm sure you'll get where you want to be.

mightychargedstudios responds:

Thank you so much. Its means alot to me that ppl are encouraging me.

[sfct part seven]

not bad, though i recommend trying to keep consistency in your audio.

littlegoblet responds:

yeah I have had trouble with audio abit but I shall try to improve in that area in future. thanx for the comment :D

[Superman is a dick]

Very nice smooth animation. i like your style a lot.

MissCaptainAlex responds:

Thank you! :D There is much more to come.

[idk]

i've got to be honest, i don't think anyone is interested in seeing this if it's just a laggy 1fps recording of a kids game.

[Adventures of This Guy]

try to work on syncing the audio with the mouth movements.

[SEXTING]

good potential, i just recommend a little more animation.
when the face stay's the same while just the mouth changes, it looks bland.
add head movements, or slight inbetweens to help make it come to life. :)

[Roblox Video!]

i'm sorry, but this just doesn't seem to make sense to me.

[The Law Of The Jungle]

i dig the background. although the face lacked detail.

Carr77 responds:

The hair didn't anyway ;)
Thanks for the comment!

[Final Fantasy Last Mages]

simply amazing. normally i strongly disagree with stick animations but this was too amazing.